Outflow

From Poetry

[edit] Outflow

Picture this like the outgoing bin on a desk except there is no outgoing bin to put anything in so we'll have to make do with the fact that things just "exist" in wikispace!

[edit] Blue China Dragon

Imagery

I like that this poem's imagery is consistent. It fits together. But maybe I'm missing the point, because the last two lines don't connect. --CocoaZen 04:01, 10 November 2006 (UTC)